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Title: Chapter 6

Not happy, too sad. You've got to have a sequel soon.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/02/10 12:50 am
Title: Chapter 6

Interesting ending Anna and yes I could imgaine it happening.  Look forward to your sequel, it should prove to be as intriquing as this one.

 



Author's Response:

Hi RaChell!

Thank you.  I 'm glad you liked the ending.  I will be posting my next story soon.

Anna

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/07 05:43 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Anna, you better write VERY quickly!!!

 

I've cried many tears over this story!!!

 

;-)

 

Loved this one as every other of your stories I've read until now!!!

 

THX

 

Thara 



Author's Response:

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Hi Thara!

Thank you so  much for your review.  I'll be posting my new story soon, "Return To Me".  Hope youll come back for more.  I'm already on Chapter 3, Chapters 1 and 2 have already been posted at Fanfiction.  But, I know you won't be reading it until it's done.  So, please look for the finished  product in a few weeks.

Have a wonderful night!

Anna 

Reviewer: Thara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/06/07 10:37 am
Title: Chapter 2

Noooo!  Poor Parker.  I have an idea - shoot Jarod for being so nasty to her.

Author's Response:

Hi afroupean!

Thanks a million for your review.  I appreciate your time in reading my story, since you're busy yourself writing a J and MP story of your own.

Anna 

Reviewer: afroupean Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/07 10:05 am
Title: Chapter 1

Story is written very, very, very, very good.

Although I'm split in two about the Ms Parker begging Jarod situation.

On the one hand my one personality (hehe) can never imagine her letting go of her pride to actually beg Jarod. 

On the other hand my other personality loves the idea of Jarod being a bit tough with her and Parker actually having to do the begging for a change.



Author's Response:

Hi afroupean!

Thank you for your wonderful compliments.  It is greatly appreciated.

Anna 

Reviewer: afroupean Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/07 10:02 am
Title: Chapter 6

wow! great ending. though, i'm not a big fan of angst, this one was so good. so sad....

but you better make that 'Return to me' sequel
with more Jarod/Miss P. happy moments because i don't think i can stand another sad story :o)

hope sequel will be out soon :o)

cheers! 



Author's Response:

Hi Jazzy!

Thank you for your time in reading and reviewing even though it didn't turn out the way you wanted it to be.  I'll be posting "Return To Me" soon.  See you then.

 Anna

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/06/07 05:23 am
Title: Chapter 5

Hmmm, see response to Jazzy in my previous review.  I'm not being critical, just that it seems to be  out of character for MP,  unless you want to explain "why " she's taken this drastric  change of direction.  It is your story and reality and I do enjoy it. 

But e-mail me with your next chapter if you want some light beta-ing (spelling, grammer etc only.)  Don't expect any input or trying to influence your story. I have problems of my own since I signed up for the next Sleepyhead chapter after Sarah.

rachell7@yahoo.com



Author's Response:

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Hi RaChell!

Thanks so much.  Well, my story has come to an end with Chapter 6, soon to be posted.  I wrote this on a dare.  One of the writers at Fanfiction said I couldn't do it.  Well, read on.  And there will be a sequel to this story.

Again, thank you.

Anna 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/07 03:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Jazzy, you are right and very insightful re: the Devine Miss P!  (big smile, while shaking head saying  'thank you!) I have to agree with you when you said:

"I think that Miss P. would never come back once she'd left. she's too proud for that... even if it's real love and suffering in question."

She like Jarod, can be stubborn and I too doubt she would have shown up at his house like she did in chapter 4.  But who knows what she would have done and since it's Anna's delightful tale of angst, suffering and  heart ache, I guess I'll let it slide. But don't think we're going to let you get away with it next time Anna!  (big wink) You might not find us so forgiving in the future.

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Author's Response:

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Hi RaChell!

Oh-oh!  Thank you so much for your great interest in this story.  I'll be upating in a minute.  Um...I like your explanation regarding Jarod and Miss Parker...but, well...On to Chapter 5

Anna 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/07 04:51 pm
Title: Chapter 4

right on! i love it! it's so intense :o)

and you're right Ra Chell.  I also think it's time for Jarod to suffer a little... because he can be sooo stubborn sometimes :o)...but i still think he wouldn't be able to really hurt Miss P.

regarding this chapter (no. 4), I think that Miss P. would never come back once she'd left. she's too proud for that... even if it's real love and suffering in question. but.. hmmm.. who knows... maybe she would... for Jarod...

conclusion... they're both sooo stubborn... that's what makes them so interesting :o)

can't wait for more :o)

cheers!



Author's Response:

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Hi Jazzy!

Thank you so very much for your wonderful review.  I'll be posting the next chapter after I'm done thanking you and RaChell.  Just hope you two will continue to read this.

Talk to you later.

Anna

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/07 05:54 am
Title: Chapter 4

mp3.jpgOh goody! Another installment in your angst filled story! (rubs hands together in delightful glee!)

WooHoo! But isn't it time for Jarod to suffer some???? (small grin here.)  Sorry about that Jazzy.  But Jarod can be too stubborn  for his own good some times.

Nice to see you're hard at work Anna. Keep it up! And lots of red and pink roses and heart shaped boxes of chocolates for your Muse, she deserves them!



Author's Response:

pretend2.jpgHi RaChell! 

Thank you for the red and pink roses, and chocolates.  My muse thanks you.  I really hope you'll like where this is going to or maybe not.

Next chapter will be up soon.

Anna 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/07 06:01 pm
Title: Chapter 3

mp3.jpgYou just get better and better all the time!  Can't wait for chapter 4 Anna.

Author's Response:

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Hi RaChell!

I should be posting this weekend.  Thanks for your review and kind words.

Anna

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/06/07 09:41 pm
Title: Chapter 2

i love it! though, i hope he'll come around and they'll get together. sorry, i'm a hopeless romantic :o)

but i think that Jarod couldn't really be that heartless. especially towards Miss P.

anyway, can't wait for more :o)

cheers!



Author's Response:

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Hi Jazzy!

Thank you.  Let's see what happens in the next chapter, if Jarod's his usual forgiving self.

Update will be soon.

Anna 

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/07 12:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

MP.jpgYou just keep coming up with wonderful angst filled stories Anna!  Your muse deserves a bouquet of roses and chocolates!  Keep it up and I look forward to seeing the next chapter soon. 

The next chapter is going to be soon isn't it?  if not then I'll have to poke you with that sharp pointy stick I've been poking Thunderchild with to make her post more of her story.



Author's Response:

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Hi RaChell!

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.  And yes, I  love angst!  Thanks for the roses and chocolates!

I will be posting very soon!

Anna  

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/07 06:24 pm
Title: Chapter 1

wow! this is getting very interesting.

hope 2 come more soon :o)

cheers! 



Author's Response:

Hi Jazzy!

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Anna

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/07 12:47 am
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