Just when I thought you couldn't make this sotry better I was wrong! This is by far the best chapter yet. You can almost see the whole thing play out like a movie in your mind's eye. Well done and your Muse deserves chocolates and roses!
Oh yes, did I happen to mention I want more? (wink, wink)
[Report This]Date: 20/07/07 06:41 pm
WOW! You outdid yourself with this chapter! loved it! Sooo- just what did Sydney let Jarod buy? (wink, wink) And I love the temper tantrum scene!
More! More! I want more! (big smile)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 17/07/07 11:33 am
a temper tantrum... lmao
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 16/07/07 08:51 pm
I love it!!!!!! I loved how he was drawn to his other self's preferred clothing, ah, but the dinner.... I loved how he acted!!!! I wonder what was on his plate... what could they have gotten that u can get at a mall?
as usual, tinanaz, MORE PLS! :-p
[Report This]Date: 16/07/07 05:47 am
That was good. Could see Jarod throwing the temper tantrum. Looking forward to more
Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/07/07 04:00 am
Really enjoyed this chapter, can't wait to see what happens at the mall.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 12/07/07 06:12 pm
Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/07 02:32 am
yay!!!!!! u updated!!!! then, for you, I will work on posting a new chappie of 1 of my fics! this is such a wonderful story!!! ur right, it WAS just BEGGING to be written!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/07/07 10:22 pm
Hey!
Fell a few chapters behind! I love the curious Jarod you are writing! It certainly woudl have been an interesting twist had Sydney and Jarod gone off together, at least for the first while.
I'm glad your muse is cooperating. For the record mine is, it's just forced to compete with grad school. ;)
Author's Response: Guess I messed that part up. Syd is staying with Jarod, the SIMs said they had to stay together and even Sydney can't argue with Jarod's SIM results. Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/07 07:39 pm
This just keeps getting better and better. I love the way you describe Jarod's inquisitive nature, realistic and amusing. Miss Parker and Broots' thoughts at the beginning of the hunt are also a pleasure.
I guess it just remains to see, was Sydney right all those years? Should he have helped Jarod, or will it only result in them catching him earlier? And how will Miss Parker do without Syd's, thought at times limited, guidance?
*stays put until the next update*
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 06/07/07 12:38 am
Enjoying this story. Keep it coming
Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/06/07 01:00 am
Oh, I should e-mail you more often with requests! (big grin) How nice to see another chapter. And a good one too! I really enjoyed it and loved the part about Sydney and Jarod and the lamp.
Don't stop now! Keep going and yes, I'm saving that sharp pointy stick for KatieQ.
Author's Response:
Please, not the stick, please no. I'll be good and write faster. Really. Katie is the slow one now, not me. I learned my lesson. Please no sticks please.
See, just the mention of the stick has me cringing on the sidelines.
Thanks for the reviews though. Glad you are enjoying it
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/06/07 09:06 pm
This is wonderful! I really like the last two chapters. great job and so many good lines. Very worth the wait and so many possiblities! Did I say nicely done? (wink)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/06/07 09:54 pm
Great job!! It always takes aw hile for an AU story to grow on me, but you are doing fabulous!! I am very curious to see how you develop the Jarod/Sydney dynamic in this.. the show gave us so few moments between those too!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/06/07 08:19 pm
Oh so bold. Very clever. And it's good to see Sydney helping out and actually doing something for Jarod for once. Keep up your great pace!
Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]Date: 18/06/07 01:42 pm
Oh how bold was that escape!!! So improbable that it probably had a really good chance of working. Glad to see Sydney has finally done the decent thing.
Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 18/06/07 04:36 am
Oooh! I am so loving this story Tinanaz!
Jarod scaring techs, he really is a pretender isn't he. Well I love it.
And three whole chapters since last time I read it, you've been busy, I like it.
Reviewer: Manoline Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/06/07 02:01 am
Nice to see you've added chapter 3! Poor Jarod and poor Sydney, how will he protect him?
So how long do we have to wait for another installment?
Author's Response: Some people are in such a hurry. Chapter 4 will be released when Jarod has finished telling me what happened next. Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/06/07 02:48 pm
Poor Jarod, I fear for him and Rainses isn't going to listen to Sydney's posturing. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 16/06/07 10:23 pm
the plot is moving ahead nicely!!! very curious to see where you are going with it :P
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/06/07 05:59 am
This story is developing well. Keep it up.
Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/06/07 01:30 am
Oh that was most intriguing. What i liked most was how 'in episode' it was. Have to rush to work now but when i get hom e will be checking out next chappie.
Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 30/05/07 08:16 pm
Very nice, like the way you write Angelo. So much in character. And the way Sydney puts the idea of escape in front of Jarod is a interesting concept. Look forward to seeing where you take this.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 30/05/07 06:20 pm
Thank you for updating. Loved the second chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/05/07 03:27 pm
Loved it. I hope that there's more. I liked that Sydney was the one that put the thought of escaping the Centre into Jarod's head by giving him the sim.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/07 12:27 pm
