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Title: Chapter 13: Father?

I'm loving this story ~ more please!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and glad you are enjoying the story.  The next chapter is about half written (or 3/4, depending on if you are asking me or my muse).  But, either way, should be posted sometime this week.  Hopefully.

Reviewer: jeanneb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/08 06:15 pm
Title: Chapter 13: Father?

Yay new chapter! And a good one too. Can't wait to see what Jarod think of the hospital once he wakes up a bit (will he be intrigued by seeing all sort of things, end up performing a surgery or hate the place as much as I do?)

And poor little Syd, that daddy-slip of the tongue isn't going to go away anytime quickly...

But, yay new chapter! 

 



Author's Response: A "Freudian" slip of the tongue, maybe?  Maybe there is a reason behind his little oops, I don't know, he hasn't told my why he said it yet.  That's what happens when you act as a ghost-writer for someone else's biography; they leave out the good parts until they are good and ready to tell you all the juicy details that you just dying to hear. 

Reviewer: Manoline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/02/08 09:36 am
Title: Chapter 13: Father?

Nice story Sydney thought up. lol All he has to do now is explain the 'Father' bit.

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Story? Sydney told the truth, just a very simple, basic form of the truth.  Jarod and MP were friends once upon a time.  Mr. P broke up their friendship.  Mr. P is the head of a very unscrupulous group of people that did use beatings, among other ways, to encourage Jarod into doing what they wanted him to do.  MP does want him back, physically at least, in the Centre and she has been chasing them.  See pure truth and nothing but the truth. 

The father bit might be a little harder for Sydney to explain to Jarod, but I don't know, Jarod and Sydney haven't told me that part of their adventure yet. 

 

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/02/08 01:49 am
Title: Chapter 13: Father?

i was wondering when the inevitable MP/Syd/J chase would really heat up! I shall look forward to the next chapter!

 

        - K
 



Author's Response:
Kinda hard to MP to chase J/S when they haven't been leaving any clues behind.  But Broots is rolling now, so who knows whats in the future for our runaway friends.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/02/08 01:12 am
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