Reviews For Hunter's Daughter
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Title: Chapter 1

LOVEEEE this so much. Gonna settle in for a nice long read.

 Reviewer: Kayla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/18 09:05 pm
Title: Chapter 33

I doubt Sydney can keep Jarod at bay when he gets nosy so yea agreed. I want to read more and know how it ends and I want to know what Jarod has to say about LYle and Miss Parker having sex and being together. He's going to react. I'm so curious. OH SYdney catching Lyle and miss Parker fighting...lol. Busted. I'd like to read the rest. I really enjoyed it.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 32

Poor Kainda. I like how she protected her secrets from Cox.. who seems nice. :) So where is the pretenderforsaken data annex you noted? The page won't load? I'm interested in reading any fics there too.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 04:07 am
Title: Chapter 31

So much darkness. I like it.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 04:04 am
Title: Chapter 30

NIce to see Sydney get protective of Miss Parker but it seems uncalled for but it also seems appropriate. It is Lyle. Allot of tension. Jarod could show up now and add to it. I wonder when he'll be coming along. Karina isn't trustworhty it seems.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 29

Really enjoyed the way MIss Parker helped LYle calm down and relax. Still can't wait for Jarod's flipping out or whatever reaction he has but I think flipping out is plausible.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:57 am
Title: Chapter 28

It's so nice how comfortable Miss Parker is with Lyle. I guess she would open to a relationship with any of the red files. They are LIKE her, all suffered the same. It's not far fetched really.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:56 am
Title: Chapter 27

Oh God Jarod is gonna flip when he finds out LYle is sexing up Miss Parker. I can imagine how confused he is what the video. Oh boy this is getting so juicy.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:54 am
Title: Chapter 26

Poor Broots is probably about to wet himself the way things are going lol. I have a feeling Jarod is going to do somethign crazy. But I like crazy Jarod. lol. I like this Lyle too.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:52 am
Title: Chapter 25

Nice sex scene. Lots of things happening here. I wonder if Miss Parker will just go ahead and kill old Raines. lol He's outliving his usefulness and is making her life hard.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:51 am
Title: Chapter 24

I dont' think Jarod knows about Lyle and Miss Parker and what they are doing with each? I hope Lyle comes through this without hurting Miss Parker. He'll feel so bad if he hurts her.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:48 am
Title: Chapter 23

The chapters are getting shorter or I'm reading way too fast? That letter was telling. I want to know what comes next and what is Jarod going to do!!

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:46 am
Title: Chapter 22

Ooooh I knew Jarod was going to be pissed. Damn damn. Love it.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:44 am
Title: Chapter 21

I"m trying to figure out where this going can't click next fast enough. Dont' know if I like their idea of discipline...they might be punishment and abuse...

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:42 am
Title: Chapter 20

I was wondering if Jarod would show up and there he is lol. Cox seems to have changed but Jarod will never believe that.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:40 am
Title: Chapter 19

Stupid Raines. He's such an evil baddie.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:38 am
Title: Chapter 18

Nice long chapter this one was. Thank you for it.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:37 am
Title: Chapter 17

OMG. I don't know what to say. Cox is so .... nice to the girl. I like that. Very different but I like twists. Kainda is wise beyond her years. I thought something worse was going to happen. Glad it didn't. :)

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:32 am
Title: Chapter 16

OMG! Getting really juicy now. Kainda must be another pretender? I could sleep or could read another chapter. Easy decision.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:29 am
Title: Chapter 15

Cox gives me the willies. Still you've done a good job with this and it's not so much twincest that I can't enjoy the story. I'm so curious about these originals. I like them.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:27 am
Title: Chapter 14

The truth is rare inside the Centre but Lyle and Miss Parker seem to be honest with each other so there's that. I'm enjoying this.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:25 am
Title: Chapter 13

 

"Kainda is different" haunting words from Angelo. Poor gilr. Sydney and his toys... :(

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:23 am
Title: Chapter 12

Yikes the suspense is crazy. He reaally wasn't himself last night. I fear for Miss Parker's life.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:21 am
Title: Chapter 11

That was... close. Too close. Lyle was scaring me too lol.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:16 am
Title: Chapter 10

Um. As Sydney would say verrry good. Getting better and better.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 03:14 am
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