Reviews For Time
Title: Taken
Date: 05/05/07 03:58 pm
This is much better then the original version you sent me! I can't take credit for anything, all I did was give you a few suggestions. :) I'm really happy with what you did with them and the way you shaped the story. Good job! And nice start to a terrific story.
Author's Response: You did help me with it. Thank you once again and I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 05/05/07 03:58 pm