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Title: End

This is by far the best story you have written in my opinion. I have to say it really touches the human side of both Jarod and Sydney.  I love the way Sydney is so encouraging and gentle with jarod who is going thru a crisises. 

And I like the way you were able to have him explain to his son Nicholas what happened and why he stays at the Centre. 

Nice touch re: Miss Parker.  You nailed her character and I liked the way you bought both Michelle's and Nicholas' memories of her into the story.

Very nice! Well done.



Author's Response: Thank you that means a lot to me. I'm glad that you liked it. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/07 12:36 pm
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