I like this song fic better then Shine.  It's not as dark and is better written.  I like the way you portray both Jarod and Miss Parker in it.  It shows a depth and feeling that most writters would have passed over. 

You can almost see Jarod holding his breath when he is watching her.And you can almost feel the guilt and insercuity she must feel because he loves her and wants to be with her even after all that has happened bewteen them in the past.  Nicely done, very passionate.