Reviews For Ethan's Escape
Title: Star Light
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Date: 03/02/10 01:26 am
A little more connection between the chapters, but it's a good plot. Any updates or sequel?!? It's just getting good!
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/10 01:26 am
Title: Star Light
Author's Response: What can I say. I come from a fandom where... ermm I had to BEG AND SCREAM for a beta.. I'm alittle gun shy about asking for one here. It's a habit of jumping around I'll try to slap my muse into shape over that *Lash Lash Spanks* Okay... You'll find out about the escape ... Nawww KatieQ is kinda right my chapters COULD be longer. I am just not used to posting under this kinda format. ... Beta reader beta reader *eyes list* *Sighs* Yeah I'm chicken Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/07 05:35 pm
I really enjoy your story except for one thing...you jump around too much. What happened during the escape? How did they escape? You could use a beta reader (can't we all????) which would help to polish and make your story really shine. I am looking forward to your next chapter.
BTW KatieQ, you should talk! Just because you write long chapters and have at least 2 stories in the works that you are tormenting us with by not giving us anything for extended periods of time, doesn't mean short chapters aren't welcomed. (big grin!) Just keep it up Courtneyhawk, I like the short chapters. It feeds my habit.
Author's Response: What can I say. I come from a fandom where... ermm I had to BEG AND SCREAM for a beta.. I'm alittle gun shy about asking for one here. It's a habit of jumping around I'll try to slap my muse into shape over that *Lash Lash Spanks* Okay... You'll find out about the escape ... Nawww KatieQ is kinda right my chapters COULD be longer. I am just not used to posting under this kinda format. ... Beta reader beta reader *eyes list* *Sighs* Yeah I'm chicken Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/04/07 05:35 pm
