Hey!

I'm the queen of dumbass mistakes. Don't be shy, send out some beta emails! I would volunteer myself but i think Jacci would fishslap me for volunteering my services as a beta.. lol.. talk about the blind leading the blind.

Your story is very creative, but I do agree with Rachell, you have jumped around a little bit. We readers crave little details. Again your concept is truly wonderful.

And to Rachell.. i don't think i've ever been served in a review for another story before ;). I do apologize for taking soo long.. i misjudged my writing speed for the last two months. Grr to school. Exams are almost here and then i should increase. If it makes you feel better the next africa is about to be sent off to the beta's.

So good luck looking for the beta's Courtney.. and really great plot that you have going.  

You have to continue. Can wait to see what happens next.