Oh no it's not finished.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:33 pm
Hey if you like !'s use 'em. They are fine and it's your story. I have no complaints.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:29 pm
It seems so far in my binge reading that the best stories have no betas and the ones with betas still have mistakes anyway. This is great like it is. Good job and it's fine without the beta.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:28 pm
I'm glad you didn't climb up and jump...like Miss Parker said. That's bad advice. I'm glad there are more chapters for me to read.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:27 pm
NO I don't hate you at all. This is SO good.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:20 pm
lol Zoe is so jealous.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:17 pm
Jarod did the right thing by not using Zoe... but I dont like Zoe at all.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:12 pm
That must have sucked for Zoe to watch Jarod so obviously in love with Parker lol.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:10 pm
Yea Parker won't be stopped when she's determined.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:04 pm
That's how I expect Parker to react to Jarod touching her. Touch is forbidden for him. He should haven known that.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 09:01 pm
He IS here lol. Jarod always makes those larger than life appearances.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 08:56 pm
Oh no! Parker has to be ok.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 08:54 pm
love it ...
„*Don’t*... touch me!” She hissed and Jarod let out a sigh.
„I don’t want to hurt you!”
„You *can’t* hurt me!” She said, raising her chin.
„You are afraid of me!” He stated.
„What?!” She asked, stunned. „You wish!”
Date: 25/02/18 02:12 am
Loving this. Soooo exciting.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/18 02:06 am
I'm really loving this first chapter.
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[Report This]Date: 24/02/18 11:23 pm
So I was relieved they are still alive but my lord so much happened. I read this several times.
Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 06:36 am
Evil cliffhanger my friend. Evil Evil.
Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 06:35 am
It's so hard to read Jarod in so much pain. Lyle is like I remember.
Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 06:34 am
I think you handled the love making part well. The tensions are still high. I don't know if that will dissipate. It's a tense time and the characters are all tense. The tension makes the show.
Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 06:33 am
Jarod shows up at the craziest times doesn't he? But that's why we love him so much. ;)
Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 06:31 am
It's so frustrating the way Sydney betrays her constantly. So much is under the surface. I guess it will all be revealed soon.
Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 06:30 am
That ended really suddenly but it was a good story and I will recommend it and other favs to some friends. Congrats.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:20 am
