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Title: The first and the only...

Oooh... so sweet...you understand completely the sorrow of their great love.

Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/03/09 12:49 am
Title: The first and the only...

Cameleon07.jpgBeautifully written!  Perfect!  Bravo!

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/07 07:41 pm
Title: The first and the only...

Good MP/Jarod for your first story. 

Reviewer: Patricia_D Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/02/07 11:54 pm
Title: The first and the only...

Is there an sequel?, I feel like it should more. Good writing.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/02/07 04:18 am
Title: The first and the only...

First of all, excellant story, well done and so MPJ. Nice going for your first try. I really like it.

Second if you quit now, we'll have to send a sweeper team from the Centre after you and you know how Blue Cove Delware sucks in the winter. SL-27 is esp. cold and dank at this time of the year. And don't forget, the rats run across the keyboard of the computers down there while you're typing. ;)

So now that you have dipped your foot in the waters of fan fic writing and wiggled your toes, there is no turning back. Even Jarod and Angelo can't save you now. We expect more great stories from you.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/07 07:13 pm
Title: The first and the only...

That was wonderful ... *sniff*

I hope it's not your last fic ... ;-) *both thumbs up*

Reviewer: Thara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/07 09:37 am
Title: The first and the only...

That was really good, I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Soonotti Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/02/07 06:28 am
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