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Title: Dreams, Hopes, and Nightmares

time for Parker to have a turning point and turn sweet

Author's Response: Request granted!  Hope you like it!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/04/07 09:37 pm
Title: Dreams, Hopes, and Nightmares

MP should be nice and let him see what almost losing him did to her. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I hope you like what I did......I believe it was what you asked for!  Sorry about the wait!

Reviewer: Vid Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/04/07 12:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1

more! more! more!

this is getting better and better :o)

Author's Response: Thanks!  Working on the next chapter right now!

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/07 09:19 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow this is great! I can add you to my list of Pretender Fan Fic Writer godlings *Bows down*

Author's Response: Wow!  Thanks!  I look forward for your reviews to this story.....it's going to be interesting to read what you think about what I'm doing.

Reviewer: Courtneyhawk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/07 03:48 pm
Title: Time Passes

sure thing! continue the story.
i love it. can't wait for more :o)
great writing.


Author's Response: I will!  And thanks!

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/03/07 03:23 am
Title: Chapter 1

This is sad. :( Keep writing, I like it.

Author's Response: I promise that you'll like the next chapter!

Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/03/07 12:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1

go on! go on! can't wait to rad more :o)

Author's Response: lol.  Thanks for the enthusiasm! The next chapter should be up in a few days.....hopefully!

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/02/07 04:37 am
Title: The Beep of A Machine

It is very good!  I am anxious to read more!  Continue the good work.

 



Author's Response: Thank you very much!  Next chapter should be up in a few days time!

Reviewer: gagnonfuji@hotmail.com Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/02/07 10:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  This is great, you had me in tears.  Please continue.  I really want to see what happens.


Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on the next chapter right now!  I should get it up in a few days....I hope!

Reviewer: badgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/02/07 03:42 pm
Title: Visiting Hours

I can literally hear my heart breaking...I would beg for you to let Jarod live, but on the other hand this story is just so...soul wrenching that I can't see it ending happily ever after (part of me doesn't want to). I'm on the edge of my seat with this. Just please don't write him off as being brain damaged in the end...or don't listen to me, you seem to know what you're doing :) 

Author's Response: Well we will definately see where the story goes!  I for one don't know yet.  One thing I do know (wink wink nudge nudge), the story is classified as a drama romance.......huh........I can only assume that means someone falls in love......:)

Reviewer: Hannah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/02/07 03:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start!! I want to read more.

But you don't do heart massage when you feel a pulse!! If there a pulse, that means that the heart is beating, a heart massage could stop the heart in this case!!



Author's Response: Oops.....my bad.  Well hopefully the next chapter will make up for this one!

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/07 06:14 pm
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