You should finish this story. I bet it's one oficial the bests you wrote!

I really, really like everything you write. I've just read this verse and "Reconstructing Jarod", and I adore the way nothing is black and white in what you write. I like the way Jarod changes, the way Miss Parker somehow uses that, consciously or not, the way everything becomes different and yet the same, the struggle for power.

Your writing is efficient, humble and smooth. I like that you really write for the story, without any overloaded crap. Seriously. You need to keep writing. I'd love to know what happens between Jarod and Lyle... Do their bond keep forming ? does Lyle overstep a line and they become enemies again ? Or maybe Jarod starts becoming more and more like him, forcing Parker to take action ? 

Wow, how childish that you disabled PM's on your fanfiction.net account, you created JUST to reply to my fan fic. And how is a plot old and tired, when I wrote MINE back in 2001. Did you miss that part?
Oh, and the reason you don't see many positive reviews, is I have been reading fan fiction for years, I don't bother replying much any more. It takes something very good, or very bad for me to reply. The few great stories I found here, were before I had a confirmed account, so they aren't signed.
I also noticed I'm one of the few brave enough to post non-anonymous reviews here. I don't know where you got the idea that all reviews should be positive. That's never been the way these things work, nor should it. If your story sucks, you deserve to know. And Mary Sue's ARE considered the bane of fanfiction. Just google "fanfiction Mary Sue" and see what you get. Readers HATE Mary Sue's.

This is one of my favorite of your stories. This series is very well done, and one that I hated to see end.