Ah man so sad. Really good job.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:37 am
MY lord those poor people can't win.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:34 am
Oh ok. I see. You haven't lost me. Lotta twists and I struggle to keep up.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:31 am
Wait. Where's Miss P? Huh?
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:25 am
OMG! What? No!
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:22 am
OMG.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:16 am
OMG.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:16 am
Oh man. So heart wrenching.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:14 am
Only 20 steps? Crap. Oh crap crap crap.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:07 am
Only 20 steps? Crap. Oh crap crap crap.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:07 am
Parker using Sydney and Jarod's safeword was so weird even for me. lol. Poor poor Jarod.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:03 am
lol Jarod is up to something again... ;)
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/18 12:00 am
HOpe he gets out.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:56 pm
Oh my my my. Really like this.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:53 pm
Oh no not Alex.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:47 pm
Ooh that got tense. Love it.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:43 pm
I like that Broots intervened as the voice of the reason and Jarod has some small amount of control now.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:39 pm
oooh? War. Yikies. Really enjoying this.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:35 pm
All for a cookie. Crap. Good job.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:32 pm
OMG!
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:26 pm
so far so good...
Reviewer: eden Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/08/18 11:18 pm
Yes, a sequel would be appreciated! More updates when ready. A predictor & pretender would be an interesting story piece for more adventures.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/01/10 08:43 pm
Wow, that was a Great story! Can't wait to read the sequel!
Reviewer: Shadow Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 08:10 am
Stunning as usual, KatieQ. Is there a sequel yet?
Reviewer: MP Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/07/07 11:57 am
Wow! Wonderful! Not much I can say about this... Your my new Hero!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind works. I'm glad to you enjoyed.. it was so much fun to write!
Date: 29/03/07 04:35 pm