A good one! I want to see what's comes next in the saga! It's just getting into action and more adventure!
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/01/10 11:13 pm
Good story. hope you will keep it up.
Date: 12/01/07 04:22 pm
Mmmoooooooooooooooooooorrrrreeeeeeeee :-) !Reviewer: Vir Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/10/06 04:30 pm
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Date: 15/10/06 12:00 pm
I really loved this part, J&MP getting along so great and then the kiss, too bad she ran away after that.
Date: 15/10/06 11:58 am
good start, please more!
Date: 15/10/06 11:53 am
I like it, but it's too short!Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/10/06 06:24 pm