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Title: Once

This is going to sound weird but to me this piece read like a rising and ebbing tide, with each verse a wave... I liked it!



Author's Response: Thanks middleman, wasn't sure what I was going for here, this is not the kind of writing I am used to.... wails... so few detials... lol, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: middleman Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 04:01 pm
Title: Once

A truly beautiful poem.  Once. . .Again is good too, but this one almost made me cry.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. Hopefully if I do another one, will actually make you cry.

Reviewer: MP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/07/07 04:45 pm
Title: Once

Beautifully written. I especially love your last line!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/04/07 07:21 pm
Title: Once

 Sums up Jarod the Pretender doesn't it?  Love the last line.  Well done, well done!


Author's Response:

Oh thanks so much, my first poetry attempt ever (and it doesnt even rhyme...lol)

 

Reviewer: Ra-Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/06 11:38 am
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