I love this story. It's beautiful but I don't understand everything that has happened. I'm autistic and what sensory overload means to me doesn't apply right to this story so I'm confused. Were they like playing sexually and oral sexing each other... or what?
"I was so nearly blind with want, need and desire that I missed any warning sign. We were about to be bound body and soul, committed completely to the senses and emotions when just at the worst possible moment she became still, unmoving. We had been teasing each other, playing with each other's ability to withstand sensory overload. I stupidly took this as more of the game, and continued my advancement toward the final goal of joining our souls. When she snapped.
To say I was unprepared for the onslaught would be an understatement. Her fist caught me on the cheekbone, directly below my right eye. My first reaction was anger. She was playing me. I could barely see so at the time I missed the look on her face of total fear and withdrawal. I held her arms down and in anger said things I could not ever imagine myself saying to her, to anyone that I was so physically and emotionally lost in. I watched as her defenses flew into action. She kicked and pushed me off, not hard when you are literally caught with your pants down and in pain. I could barely see out of either eye for my left eye was tearing in sympathy with the injured right eye. "
Yeah, I totally though.. I see that Jarod would hold her down. He can be dark like that. This is a ten.Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/05/20 01:54 am
Dude I can totally see this happening. I think anyone would freak out having sex with that hunk guy. I mean...seriously? Yeah even Miss Parker...I'm looking at you Miss Parker. So I like your story. It's freaking great! It will always be complicated for them. Well done. I'm so glad I found this place.Reviewer: Macey Soles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/17 09:08 am
I really like this story but I don't know what is going on when you write
"We had been teasing each other, playing with each other's ability to withstand sensory overload. I stupidly took this as more of the game"
I don't understand what that means. Teasing and ability to withstand sensory overload how? I feel stupid but I hope someone will explain and I really hope it's the author that will tell me what they mean. I want to know what is going on. Thank you.
Date: 03/01/17 10:29 pm
Nice insight into the close relationship, I always thought they belonged together but it would never be easy. You wrote it out that way, but you also showed it to be rewarding for them to work and compromise it out.
I read this before but think I enjoyed it more this time.
you should write more.
Date: 26/10/07 08:03 pm
Very nice! Well done and interesting. You should write more. Defintely not a thunk thunk of a cow bell. ;)
Date: 19/09/06 09:30 pm
Good first shot at fan fiction, makes me feel like giving it a shot! I like that Jarod didn't give up on her... just as he didn't on the series.Reviewer: Tess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/09/06 11:47 am
Great job for a first time fanfic! you did what I could not with this story idea. I hope it's just one of many.Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/09/06 10:08 am