wow! great chapter, well written with the twisting paths all coming to an apex. So now what happens? I like the chapter name as it fits so well to what you have written, gotta love it when a plan comes together, that was perfectly named and very well written.
So can broke be mended, or are the parts recycled? Is any relationship totally without a crack? Are any of us? or do we just dress to hide the flaws?
Looking forward to see where you go from here.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great review. Loved it.
And I'm done with chapter 25. Just need to be betaed. Might be a surprise their for you.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/01/10 11:59 pm
I'm so glad to see a new chapter of this. So soo good. I want more :) Fantastic writing as usual (and fantastic editing as well I suspect)
Cannot wait for the next one!
Author's Response: yay, cool. thanks for the great review. here's hoping that my muse plays nice and I can manage a quiker update than this one. ;-) Reviewer: KatieQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/12/09 05:24 pm
