Amazing story so far! I love the twist and turns of this story. And the flashbacks to previous episodes, especially when it plays into the Miss Parker and Jarod relationship is brilliant. Thank you for killing my boredom! Please update soon!
Author's Response: and updated it is...;-) thanks for the review
Date: 21/04/09 12:11 am
Brilliantly done. The unusual format could have been a real diaster if it wasn't handled just right, I could have really done a number (not a good one either) with that attempt, but you pulled it together perfectly.
I will complain that I hate cliff hangers! yea yea.. I know they work to keep the reader's interest and all that.. but as the reader I do hate them.
I have enjoyed the story very much and look forward to seeing how you continue to the end, as much as I hate endings to good stories and fanfiction has many well done stories that top what the Pro's have done in creativity and imagination. Good work..
Author's Response: wow, thanks for a great review. ;-) Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/02/09 04:06 am
Oooooh I love love love the Margaret/evil Daddy interaction. And I love the idea of her going back to the old house. Really helps to give a look inside the mind of mommy...feel really bad for her poor thing.
And I think you do the "half immobilized/ half not"-Parker verrry well. Lyle as always both freaks and creeps me out. And poor poor Sydney (and his head. Ouch!).
*bites nails* (yeah yeah, bad habit I know). What will you think of next?
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/09 10:44 am
