Ahh! Who's "he"?! What's going on? I love that Margaret is in it like this, though, even though I'm not sure what's going to happen next. =)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/10 08:28 am
Ooooh intrigue *hears the music swell dramatically (August Rush, anyone?)*
Lovelove the scene with the flashbacks and the sweeper-slashing. With a bit of fine tuning it turned out great.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
as per request, this is me responding and saying thanks to a super beta who helped to fine tune said scene, with Terra's help. ;-) heheheh, seriously, thanks for the input in making a good chapter great.
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/08 10:42 am
OMG!!! Okay, first can I say you've made my day with a new chapter to your story!! =^D
This was a really good chapter. I agree, that fight scene was really well written. Gosh I hate that they got Miss Parker and beat her, it seems, to within an inch of her life. But she really put up a good fight! Also, I love I how Jarod knew that something was wrong, he could sense it. In short: this was a great chap and I hope it won't be long before you post another one! :-)
Patiently waiting for the next installment,
Twingirl
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hopefully it won't be so long before I post again. Next chapter is almost done. ;-) Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/03/08 06:17 pm
What an interesting bit with Margaret! An interesting POV!
This chapter was very well done. I also really like MP's strength (the source of) during her fight scene.
Cannot wait for the next bit!
Author's Response: heya, thanks. What do you mean interesting POV? hehehehe, here's hoping you posting before my next chappie arrives. ;-) Reviewer: KatieQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/03/08 11:49 am
I am so looking forward to the next chapter. I need to know who the person is
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hopefully soon you'll be able to satisfy your curiosity. ;-)
Date: 24/03/08 04:47 pm
Great story!
...and the plot thickens... more soon, I hope.
Author's Response: Thanks. More will follow, hopefully soon. ;-) Reviewer: wormie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/03/08 01:17 pm
Gasp! Sputter, sputter . . .
Awesome chap! The Parker fight scene was amazing--the way you tied in snippets of flashbacks. It was so artistic and surreal. And the flashback with Margaret . . . wow, didn't see that coming. Great development, can't wait for the next chap!
Author's Response:
Splutter? Like to read stuff like that. ;-) I reached my goal. YAY. Thanks so much for the review. Appreciate it.
Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/08 11:26 am
Dun dun dun. Talk about a cliffhanger. Suspense and anguish all tied up together. Please dont leave us hanging too long. Too many questions are now brewing in my overactive imagination that; questions need answers before I drive myself nuts. Please, please, write soon.
Author's Response: Dun dun...and my evil plan worked. mwhahahaha, your imagination will now run wild with
unsubstantiated theories. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/08 10:09 am