This is intense! I hope that you will put up another chapter soon. I really wanna know what's happening. Is that Jarod's mother in the farm house? His sister? Who's MP trying to protect from the Centre? Is MP gonna get killed to protect Jarod and this woman!? So many questions! (Of course I know all will reveal itself in due course) :) But, I just thought I would throw out all these things in my head hoping it will bring another chapter soon. You continue to write an exciting story. Can't wait for more. ;^)

Twingirl

I like your story.  Very good.  The ending is nice.

Her gun confuses me.  Did you write that they gave her a revolver or a semiautomatic pistol?  A revolver has six bullet.  By my count, she only fired twice.  I hope you got Lyle confused on the count.  

A semi-automatic pistol like the one we saw on the show can carry over 20 bullets depending on the size of the magazine.

If she has a revolver, give her some speed loaders which reloads a revolver faster than by hand.

If it's her famous Smith and Wesson 9mm, give her some extra magazines so she can get herself and her new found friend out of the house. 

That's my technical nitpicking.  Tom Clancy's muse took over me while reading this chapter.