Just on a general note, it's so cool how you start every chappie with a famous scene from The Pretender that fits with the chapter. And you tell them so well too.
I must say, I really like your Lyle (watch out 'Nothing Means Something' :P ) how you manage to tell him so grotesquely genuine.
Yet another great chapter
Date: 06/09/07 10:22 am
Getting better and better! Can't wait for more! And loved the way you ended it.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed




Date: 03/09/07 09:28 pm
I love how you are mixing the episodes with the fanfic. Excellent job. How soon for the next chapter?
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/07 07:12 pm
this story is great! i love the flow of it.
i especially liked the tenderness between Miss P. and Jarod in this chapter. great writing.
can't wait for more :o)
peace!
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous




Date: 01/09/07 01:50 am
So glad that you're back with more!! I really liked the chapter. I am curious to find out who this woman is that Lyle is chatting with (did you reveal that already and I missed it?) I don't think so, but just checkin'. Anyway, great story, so excited for more!
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/08/07 08:41 pm
I like. More please! Winter's Tale makes me :) :) :).
Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]Date: 31/08/07 04:32 pm