I just read your story, it was good.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Loved it. ;-)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/06/11 12:52 am
Superior writing; as always, you've captured Jarod perfectly. I LOVE the change you made in formatting just b/4 posting - not only a creative literary move, but the center headings also greatly enhance and strengten J's visceral emotions by delineating (thus emphasizing) each section. It's a subtle change that work's very well. I'm so proud. Your writing just gets better and better. So, as opposed to Jacci's (I think) shooting heads across the room, you decided to leave in the "kind warm eyes" taking care of Jarod, rather than "this man" doing the job? What's a beta to do. Humpft.
Love u & the clan anyway, T
Author's Response:
lol, thanks. ;-)
I actually like the kind warm eyes....;P
Reviewer: Topanga Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/02/10 10:34 pm
I'm so glad to see a new chapter and looking forward for more!!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review.
Date: 28/12/09 08:27 pm
Wow! You've outdone yourself. This is of your best chapters so far. I loved the way you dove into Margaret's psyche and her dysfunctional relationship with her dad. What a mixed bag for Jarod to walk into. Yikes. I don't envy him; but then again, he does get to meet his mommy at last.
The scene with Miss P and and her brother was just like they really are and three cheers for Dr. Sydney. He finally got that part of his anatomy that Jarod has (whatever that means) and stood up to Mr. Lyle who is a bad man. i can hardly wait to see what happens next. You're a terrific writer.Thank you Mrs. Whashaza. All the manatees love your stories, but me the very mostest.
Reviewer: Georgia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/01/09 07:11 am
Now you are making me look bad, newly with child and time to write a new chappie! It was spectacular, I cannot wait to read more, so no complaints (for now) that this is the one stuck in your head.
Reviewer: KatieQ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/08 05:07 am
Are we already up to chapter 16? WOW! You've held us captive, huh, I mean entranced by your story so far. Nicely done but we need more! I feel like a addict of your story. (blushing)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/07 03:52 pm
"Yay!" was my first response when I saw that there was a new chapter! And "Uh oh" is my response now after reading. This is getting so good. Lyle is awful...we all know it, but I just had to say it! Great chapter! Keep 'em coming! :o)
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/11/07 12:51 pm
OMG!!! Wow, wow, wow!! I am certain that my heart rate went waaay above normal while reading this chapter. I was actually talking to myself--screaming outloud no less--when Jarod came outside from the store and saw the black van: "oh no, oh no!" This is a really good chapter. I can't imagine how I am gonna wait to see what happens next! I love it!
Twingirl10
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/09/07 06:35 pm
Hmmm, interesting. Do the PTB really know J is still alive? Do they really believe in the scrolls? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed [Report This]Date: 16/07/07 10:51 am
ok, lemme guess.... j, mp, and a couple sweepers? and it sounds like she must have very recently left the centre.. right? :-p just insanely wild guesses...
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed [Report This]Date: 10/07/07 08:38 pm
I miss your stories!!
I hope you're all right!!
I'm looking forward to read you again
Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/04/07 03:28 pm
One word for you... MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE... Okay that's seven words.. but we need more
Reviewer: Courtneyhawk Signed [Report This]Date: 18/08/06 04:26 pm
well written as usual. now, who's in the snow and who is his wife???
Reviewer: laquita Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/06 02:38 pm
Well, I want more, and where's the romance?? lol I will wait for your other stories, you know I will be here to read their sequels!! ;))
Reviewer: julia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/06 02:29 pm
What an intense beginning! you got me hooked :)
Reviewer: aartemis Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/06 07:10 am