I like this story. Are you going to finish this story because I would love to read it.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/02/08 01:29 pm
Please post again soon! Nice new twist with a new sibling for Jarod. So, does Emily not exist in your story?
Author's Response: Hmmm, a problem I had only vaguely thought of. This story was actually written almost 5 years ago, and I've been going through the process of revising it, so I might have to re-address that in part 2---or maybe figure out a way to work it into a later chapter. Thank you so much for the comment!
Date: 25/01/06 02:59 am
Great start to the story! keep it coming!
Reviewer: aartemis Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/01/06 05:15 pm