Title: Part 1

I like your story.

Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/06/15 08:42 am
Title: Part 1

This is one of my favorites of many when it's a pretend with both main characters doing a pretend together. More updates or sequel! This is really good writing as well. Good use of contractions since many writers forget to write how a typical conversation is sometimes. A lot of writers have a tendency to write to formally and forget how real diaglogue should be.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/10 07:52 pm
Title: Part 7

Really liked your story and the way you write these characters. You even had me liking Lyle, which, trust me, it's a hard thing to do. Also, loved MP and J, how about some more Romance? ANyway, good job, post more soon!!!

Reviewer: bloodymary2 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/05 03:16 pm
Title: Part 7

I'm reading Gemini Vengence too. Please keep posting both.

Reviewer: michelle Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/05 03:41 am


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