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Title: The Ultimate Pretend

This was, by far, the best story I have read !! It was tactful, plausible and fun !  Thank-You

Reviewer: Holmes45 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/13 04:25 pm
Title: The Ultimate Pretend

Very interesting story. Wonderfully written! Your pretender payback was great too btw.

I'd love for you to continue this. Pregnancy from the ultimate male prespective and it's absolute torture, albeit self inflicted but either way, I love to see Jarod suffer. (He's so good at it.) And I can only imagine how Parker would react.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 08:36 pm
Title: The Ultimate Pretend

God, what a story! Really well written. Want, no, need a sequel with a waking up Parker, please!!!!! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/04/09 09:48 pm
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