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Title: Epilogue

I didn't like it; I loved it, again. Perfect title by the way.

Reviewer: Vaanya69 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/12/18 04:34 am
Title: The Beginning

Awesome dialogue. Since I'm rereading it for the 3rd time, don't have to tell you how much I liked it. 

Reviewer: Vaanya69 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/18 09:55 am
Title: The Beginning

This is DIFFERENT, and that's why I like it. Charlie really is lovely as a kid, even more as an adult, and I love that memory you created of him and Jarod at the end. Finally, I must say this last chapter is one of the best ever read on this site, so thank you! 

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/13 02:17 am
Title: Epilogue

This one was good.  A quick ending, but another theme to add onto the pretender series world. A true favorite read into all these different themes.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/12/09 09:21 pm
Title: End of an Era

There's too much information.  You should write seperate stories and complete them.  One about Jarod rescuing Parker, and continuedd with just tht, because that could have been great.  Then the bargain and then another one for young Mr. Parker

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/11/08 05:45 pm
Title: The Beginning

actually I think it is a good plot, and well executed. It's been a while since you have posted anything new. It would be nice to see something from you! Please.

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31/01/08 12:22 pm
Title: The Beginning

I loved this story! THis is what I would envision happenning in the long run..in my world of course! Great job! Your a great author!

Reviewer: DarkAngel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/07 04:31 pm
Title: The Beginning

I absolutely loved your story.Charlie was just fantastic character as Jarod and Parker's son.You had everything the pretender usally had,the baddies and the goodies.Once again great work and thank you for the great story.

Reviewer: dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/06 01:52 am
Title: Epilogue

It was good, i enjoyed it, made for a nice read.

Reviewer: lea Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/06 10:05 pm
Title: Epilogue

Yes, the ending was sappy, and a bit of a switch from previous the action-packed chapters; however, overall, the story was wonderful. Miss Parker and Jarod were very true to charcter and Charlie was a nice blend of their personalities. I'm glad you didn't added the chapters after at the Centre--having them ride of into the sunset that easily wouldn't have been realistic (though neither was a wonded Jarod and MP fighting off a dozen sweepers. : ) ). Anyway, I always seem to enjoy your work and this was no exception.

Reviewer: michelle Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/05 03:46 am
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