Reviews For Crimson Kiss
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Title: Chapter 2

I hope that you continue this. It is very interesting.

 Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/09/13 08:01 am
Title: Chapter 2

Good plot! Writing is bad considering it isn't your primary one. More updates! It's just getting into the heart of the story.

 Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/01/10 07:14 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Loved the flashback!!!! Want more, please!!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 09:34 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I really love this story! Please continue it!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 04:27 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Wow, what a story! It's great! And don't excuse for the long flashback, its so well written, thrilling and full of good ideas. PLEASE continue it!!!!! Need more :)

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/04/09 09:16 pm
Title: Chapter 2

You use English quite well, but not well enough yet, so I propose to you that you don't stop writing. What you lack in English you make up in plot. Its fast going and different from the usual. Besides whatever happened to your comment I PROMISE I WILL FINISH THIS STORY?

Reviewer: Cassandra Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/06/06 12:10 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Hmm, sure can see a lot of tension built up between them in that flashback. I like it so far. Jarod's never ending defiance and Miss Parker's quest to get away from the center, just things never seem to work out as they think, or do they? So, what are or were you planning next? Miss Parker somehow managing to help Jarod? Them getting very *close* due to circumstances?

 Reviewer: Mira Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/06 01:44 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Good story so far. Can't wait until you post more.

 Reviewer: Ann Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/05 02:29 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Wow, just wow. A simple three letter word. I can't wait to read more...

 Reviewer: Alexandra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/05 10:58 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I have just one thing to say, don't dare stop writing, before this story is finished.

 Reviewer: Nathou Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/05 06:18 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting story. I suggest a beta reader. Your english is very good, but there a few phrases that are "off" and a few words that, while most of us know what they mean, we don't use them in regular conversation very often.

 Reviewer: michelle Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/09/05 03:49 am
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