Reviews For Trapped
Title: Part 1

The story would be better if you used proper spelling/grammar. The shortcuts give the impression of haste and carelessness and sloppy writing, when in fact, the writing is pretty good.

Reviewer: jmpfan Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/09/05 05:40 am


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