Reviews For New Year
Title: Part 2
Date: 19/03/10 01:55 am
This reads as if it were play by play instead of an actual storyline. I would suggest taking a few more english classes to improve composition and content as well as actually reading some adventure and mystery books to give you an idea of a plot.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/03/10 01:55 am