Oh honey your muse is doing just fine and so are you. I like this. Very dark and Miss Parker seems to be in trouble but I definitely am enjoying this.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:03 am
Ok so what has MP done now?? lol I hope she's not suicidal.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 12:00 am
Geeezzz, creepy is putting this Paul character mildly! Interesting insight from all the characters. Greeat writing as well! More updates on Jarod's last dream, Ethan and Parker's whereabouts, and Lyle's torture storyline with Paul. So what's with the all the hearts from all the victims, what's behind this storyline? A lot to build on. Hope you add more soon.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/06/10 01:35 am
mwahhhh!! *evil, evil laughter*
"I am Mr. Lyle. And for the next few hours you are going to remember that for the rest of your life."
Timeless words, timeless ending, timeless fic! I loved it! I'm startled by even the familiar sounds of my house at the moment (ancient old houses, while charming, seem to have a language all their own) and I won't be sleeping tonight, that said, perfect fic! A real thriller. I will definitely revisit this one.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:38 am
oh my...no, no, please don't let it be the end for Parker..
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:31 am
Ewww, creepy son of a .. you have really created a monster, that's a testament to your skills as an incredible author.
3:30 AM and I'm completely creeped out, all thanks to you! *reaches for butcher knife and flashlight, grips cell phone tighter*
Great job!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:30 am
Oh wow, brotherly concern is nice. Love Lyle, hmm, gorgeous devil.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:21 am
Oh my...I hate this son of a bitch!!! I hope he pays in the end. I hope Parker will be alright, this is worse than being imprisoned by jarod...um, I think. ;) Such a well written fic though, loving it.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:20 am
Oh wow, this is getting crazy- I mean that in the best of ways. Clicking to next chapter now.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/10 09:18 am
Really terrific !!! Paul is as sick as Lyle and that's really frightening. Please continue the story, I'd really love what mad plans the mean ones are going to make and I'd really love to know how Jarod, Miss Parker & Co are going to outsmart them and destroy them in the end. KEEP WRITING !!!
Reviewer: Nathou Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/05 08:23 pm
The story is very good. I hope that you will continue it. It is really frightening and I'd like to read more of it. I hope that Paul is not going to kill Parker.
Reviewer: LILY Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/08/05 09:01 pm
