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Title: Part 8

Anything IS possible. This is so freaking scary tho.

Reviewer: Brook G Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:50 pm
Title: Part 7

Abuse begetting abuse. Yep. That happens too much. Scary. Scary scary . You're really good at writing.

Reviewer: Brook G Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:46 pm
Title: Part 6

Ffff. God. Ugh. Scary.

Reviewer: Brook G Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:43 pm
Title: Part 5

Uhhh he can't stop himself. Scary.

Reviewer: Brook G Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:38 pm
Title: Part 4

It keeps getting better and better. Scarier too.

Reviewer: Brooke G Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:32 pm
Title: Part 3

THanks for including Broots. I hated he was excluded from the first Pretender novel. He made the show.

Reviewer: Brook G. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:27 pm
Title: Part 2

 I so hate the thought of Parker being abducted..by anyone but Jarod... and this is so scary already.

Reviewer: Brook G Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:20 pm
Title: Part 1

Hell of a beginning! Well written too.

Reviewer: Brook G. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/08/18 07:18 pm
Title: Part 20

Nice. Spooky as hell but nice.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 01:24 am
Title: Part 19

It seems you were having some doubts up in your disclaimer but it's all working well if you ask me.  I agree with Miss Parker that ' it has to."

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:48 am
Title: Part 18

Oh yes. She can't, she won't and she isn't obligated to. It's not her problem. I love that.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:43 am
Title: Part 17

Broots' reaction is priceless.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:41 am
Title: Part 16

Nice touch with the added tension between siblings.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:39 am
Title: Part 15

Soo plausible and so well written.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:33 am
Title: Part 14

There's a shocker with Lyle being involved. Didn't see that coming. Love the twist.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:29 am
Title: Part 13

Gross. 'you have me' Noes. Oh noes.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:24 am
Title: Part 12

I don't like that Jarod laughed at the last line but I get it. Still damn Jarod. lol. I hate that Miss P is dying.. Ahhh. This fic is gutting.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:21 am
Title: Part 12

I don't like that Jarod laughed at the last line but I get it. Still damn Jarod. lol. I hate that Miss P is dying.. Ahhh. This fic is gutting.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:21 am
Title: Part 11

Yep he really is a sick f*ck but this story is so excellent.

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Date: 24/08/18 12:17 am
Title: Part 10

lol at your disclaimer at the top. The fandom is just about gone and it's only fan fic that's really kept the interest at all...the freshness and the women specifically and new perspectives I seem to like most these days but with the original story line. Shame you are lost out there and not on the radar. You write well.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:14 am
Title: Part 9

Madonna is good. Always. Still. I love your writing. This fic is really freaking wonderful. I don't read much ff, rarely do I get pulled in like this.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:09 am
Title: Part 9

Madonna is good. Always. Still. I love your writing. This fic is really freaking wonderful. I don't read much ff, rarely do I get pulled in like this.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:09 am
Title: Part 8

You haven't depressed me if it helps. This is well written and just very disturbing. Good stuff here.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:05 am
Title: Part 8

You haven't depressed me if it helps. This is well written and just very disturbing. Good stuff here.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/18 12:05 am
Title: Part 7

Painful to read at times but this is the reality for too many people.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/08/18 11:59 pm
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