Title: Chapter One

Hi just read your story it was very good.

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/14 07:27 am
Title: Chapter Five

This is another favourite I've read twice. It's nice and lovely, even if the choice of the name is not lucky (Ethan among all!). You write pretty well and you describe their feelings even better. Anyway once again I would have loved to see some closure for them, after all they've been through. But you're right. J has always been there for MP, and always be ;)

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/13 06:59 am
Title: Chapter Five

Another good read! Good expansion on this new character. There's always other Centre bodies that haven't told their tale yet. As always a good Pretend is the perfect action adventure addition involving these two.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 10:28 pm


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