I love this one very much ;) The music titles are great and I love this pianist-Jarod very much. The story is nice and there are a couple of lines that really make it great! I loved the story about Broots dead-not dead! I was so sad for him!
Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/12/12 12:11 am
A lot of good plots within this story. A little disjointed at times between the chapters. Points of view were a little mixed sometimes. This version of Jarod seemed weak as if he couldn't figure some things out which would have been obvious for a genius of his caliber. This story could have been split into different sequels so different plots would've been concentrated on for more depth. You have a lot of ideas here that seem to be a good springboard for more stories.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/03/10 08:32 am
No, no man would sacrifice HIS DAUGHTER to let his colleagues live. Broots made it VERY clear in the first season, that his daughter came first. Her safety, was what enabled him to stand up to Miss Parker in the first place (and she scared the shit out of him).
Poorly done.
Date: 11/01/10 04:53 am
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