Reviews For The End of Innocence
Title: 17 : Bethesda
Date: 11/05/10 08:50 am
You've gotta continue this. Biggest qualm is that Lyle is sick! Parker is too weak in this one, and where the heck is her gun in all this?!? Really out of character for her. Interesting plotlines and well written. Actually riveting for each chapter.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/10 08:50 am
Title: 17 : Bethesda
Date: 27/05/08 07:47 pm
This is such a good story - what a great pity it is unfinished!
Perhaps, in the near future, you might consider finishing this ? It is far too good to leave without a proper ending!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/05/08 07:47 pm
Title: Prologue : Shadows Fall
Date: 22/05/05 05:03 pm
Great story so far! You've gotten me hooked!
Reviewer: M Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/05/05 05:03 pm
Title: 4 : Surprise!
Date: 21/05/05 09:56 pm
I really enjoyed reading this! Great job!
Reviewer: AngelWings Signed [Report This]Date: 21/05/05 09:56 pm