This sory is incredible. I hope you continue the story
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/01/10 10:46 pm
i was following this story since you started it and am now anxiously for your update. please pelase go on!!
Reviewer: DS Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/02/09 02:47 pm
This is really such a brilliant story!! And well done on Parker. You see, a softer, nice Parker usually only gets annoying and boring in my opinion. But in this story she's not. And the fact that Jarod's left out of everything makes my feminist side scream: yaaaaaaay!
So thank you very much for this story so far, but you better finish this, because I'm not creative enough to continue this on my own.
Reviewer: LS Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/10/08 10:09 am
This is great, but would you update already? I'm dying to know what happenes next - plus a "pleaseupdate" from 16 friends/family members!
And how the heck is Jarod still in the dark?
Reviewer: Kaite Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/08 03:29 pm
Nice continuation of your plot. your writing is well done, and I enjoy your depiction of Parker. I do wonder how it is that you are able to keep the genius in the dark for so long. I'm sure all will be revealed soon.
looking to see how it all works out
Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/07/08 06:03 pm
That's a really wonderful story! I'm checking every day for a new chapter! You write it so well and each character has its own important role to play! except for Jarod, who's a bit out of the plot but that's a new thing in a Pretender story so I'm glad to see something like that, and it's working very good!
We don't really know what to think about the father of the child... You insist a lot on the possibility of Major Charles being the father and he's acting so nice with Parker while Jarod is just really harsh on her (with what he thinks of her being with his family but personnally I think he just can't stand to be the one in the dark! He loves playing with Miss Parker's mind but he doesn't really like it when SHE plays with his mind!)
Love your story so far and I'm glad that Miss Parker is given such an important role (I'm definitely a Miss Parker Fan!!!) Also love Broots' reaction at discovering that Miss Parker talks in her sleep! Please, Be quick for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 12/07/08 12:12 pm
As we have come to expect from you, this is a great chapter. Well written and keeping everyone involved!
You have us on the edge of our seats!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/06/08 03:36 pm
A very good chapter - I am really enjoying this story - I hope you will continue writing it ! All our favourite characters are there but I hope Jarod turns up soon ...I'm really missing him!!!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/06/08 01:54 pm
I am really enjoying this story and anxiously await further chapters. I wonder when Jarod will be let in on the plan - the characters are very realistic and faithful to how they were portrayed in the series. Thanks for sharing your story with us and I look forward to reading further.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/06/08 07:39 pm
This is very promising, don't even dare let this story unfinished, you will not be forgiven. Lol
Reviewer: LILY Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/08/05 09:22 pm
