Oh, darn. It's unfinished- aside from that, it was a great read but I would love to know how the story ends.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/11 09:37 pm
I love the inclusion of Nicholas- very underused and quite a looker. *winks*
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/11 09:36 pm
Nice chapter and very fitting lyrics for the Parker/Jarod dynamic.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/11 09:34 pm
Aha! Jarod confessed his feelings- very unexpected.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/11 09:28 pm
Where did the chapter disappear to?
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/11 09:24 pm
Haha, I love this line: "If you tell him I said that, I'll deny it and make sure your remaining days here on earth a living hell. Do you understand me, Syd."
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 09:24 pm
Captivating beginning. I really feel for Parker and Sydney.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 18/04/11 09:22 pm
Oh wow, that's it?!? You gotta have a sequel to this or updates! It's too good a plot to leave hanging!
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/02/10 09:36 pm
Ooh, Lyle's involved in this situation from a non-Jarod angle! When will you have more for us to read? I'm curious to find out what.
Reviewer: Doranwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/10/08 05:11 am
Oh man, this is getting good!...please keep going :D
You're doing a great job...Isn't it a shame that we love to see Jarod hurt and needing help from a certain someone,lol ;)
Reviewer: Heather Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/07/08 07:15 am
I have just finished reading this story it was great i hope that you will soon finish it.
Reviewer: julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/01/06 02:49 pm
Trish, I wish you would find the time and desire to finish this story! It is well written, the characters are well tuned.... all it needs is an ending. I miss your writing.
Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/12/05 02:41 am
I remember reading this story some time ago. Although i thought there was more to it. I spent a wonderful time rereading it. The only thing that would make it better would be an ending! Please.
Reviewer: zipp Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/10/05 01:17 am