I don't think I've read the previous version of this story so I don't really have anything to compare it to. But I like this story regardless. It's an interesting change that Jarods capturer is so young, both physically and mentally. Grace is so naive, and yet takes violence completely for granted, which is a very interesting combination. Looking forward to many more chapters.
Author's Response: thanks so much, there should be some more coming soon i hope (just waiting for the co-author bugs to be ironed out) Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/01/07 07:27 am