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Title: 9

Great story. It's Dad you didn't continue

Reviewer: Desy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/07/20 09:46 pm
Title: 9

I know it's been a real long time now, but I would really love to see this outstanding story to be continued!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/02/12 04:31 pm
Title: 9

please finish this story!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/10/11 03:10 pm
Title: 9

Fantastic story. Although very upsetting. I want to know what happens and that everything will be ok in the end! it all needs fixing. I am anxious to know what will happen.

Reviewer: TheScientist Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/09/10 05:29 am
Title: 9

Very, very, very good story! One of the best I ever read! PLEASE continue it, I need a happy end for Jarod!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/05/09 12:55 pm
Title: 9

Here I am again, back after having devoured aftermath in one sitting! Loved the escape (espacially the fact that it took one heart-wrenching failed attempt before they succeeded). Gem rules!!! Actually, Gem and Broots rule!

 I love the fact that you are not using a magic wand to make all the bad feelings, insecurities and psychological deconstruction go away...

Please please don't let Jarod go back to Lyle though.... Please let him catch a glimps of the carved L between his shoulderblades, perhaps after a shower or something... Please let him email Sydney in his confusion... Please please please..... I don't even know what I'm begging for, just don't put him through anymore, Jarod has suffered enough!

Anxiously waiting for more,
middleman.

Reviewer: middleman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/10/08 12:36 pm
Title: 9

hey jacs,

Topanga suggested i read entropy and aftermath. she said to tell you that she forgot how well-written both these stories are.  it certainly reminded her of why she considered you and kye to be "celebrities" in the world of tP fanfiction (not that ishe reads any other kind).  but i will tell her these stories are too sad for me.  i don't like jarod hurt.  he's my friend. 

i like flipper. 

i think you did such an excellent job with keeping everyone in character and pushing it over the top to the dark side that it was extremely difficult to get through and i actually had to read it in pieces, it was so disturbing.  y'know my species has a very simple life.  we eat mostly.  i might like the green stuff.  i like sea grass.

when i started "aftermath," i had to first jump to the end to prepare myself so i'd know if it had a happy or at least hopeful ending.  i'm sorry, but i cannot recommend it to my friends unless you write another chapter with a happy ending. 

the tv show always had happy endings.  we watched it from the boats, when we come up to breathe. 

you do understand tv's can't go in the water?  jarod said people are smart, not like him, but if they're so smart why do they hurt us with their propellors?

 i am happy here at pretender centre and missing pieces. i will like it when topanga write a special page all about just us manatees.  make her hurry up.  and i will read fan fiction that has happy endings.

love,    georgia

 

 

 

Reviewer: Topanga Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/08/08 01:24 am
Title: 9

Wonderful plot and very well written, interestingly told as we watch them destroy Jarod. You told the story in a logical way that you could see what the actions were doing to him. 

I will admit that I was left with a creepy feeling, especially when you know that man is capable of doing so horrific thing to each other... and in fact has done it throughout history. The added element of creepiness is Lyle and Cox, those two alone have a high level of creepy going for them in the Centre.

Great writing, but do we get to see Jarod recover? He does have those that care about him. It would seem if he did recover it would be a long trip back. A real leap of faith. Can he do it? 

Reviewer: nightowl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/08 09:11 pm
Title: 9

I am so looking forward to more chapters

I need to know if Jarod finds himself

Please write more 

Reviewer: Tash Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/03/08 06:59 am
Title: 9

Please, we need a sequel!!

I want to know what will happen to Jarod, Miss Parker, how the "show" will end!!

 You HAVE to write this sequel!

Please, please, please!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your words, they mean a lot. I have left this poor thing abandoned for far too long, my muse got lost in coding somewhere. I have an idea for the third and final part now and am hoping to start working on it soon.

Reviewer: Ritha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/09/06 10:53 am
Title: 9

*nods* I must concur. So very dark and believeable storyline.. you describe so well how Jarod succumbs to the darkness he's always feared to give in to, and Lyle of all people. Chilling. Please do write a continuation! We're all eager to know just what Jarod will and can remember.. and what Miss Parker's choice will be as well.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Mira. Am goinig to try to get it completed if i can kick my muse awake long enough.

Reviewer: Mira Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/06/06 01:23 pm
Title: 9

I love this story! Please continue, I really want to find out what happens. I love that Lyle became Jarod's bestfiriend. Please write soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. It has been a long while, real life and websites seem to take all my time now, but i am really going to try and get the third part finished.

Reviewer: badgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/05/06 07:45 pm
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