Oh, it's incomplete, but otherwise, it's a fantastic read. You're not going to leave us all hanging? Are you?
Thanks for reading! It is my intention to finish! Life has intervened and effectively derailed my attempts until now. It is encouraging to know that you are enjoying the tale. I am currently deciding what to do with Alicin's tormentors. Donald Gleason may step into an empty elevator shaft soon, but death is too good for Jerry Wurth...bwahahah. Wurth, btw, irepresents real person who worked for well known research and development corporation and drew out a lawsuit for a man who worked in a room full of toxic and radioactive cannisters (not harmful, they insisted) until the man finally died of cancers related to the substances he was working with. The man and his wife were dear friends of my sister in law and I was moved by their story.Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 05:12 am
You covered a great deal in just this one chapter and I almost felt sorry for Raines there at the end but then, there's the fact that he's doing, either directly or indirectly, to others what was done to his daughter. He's quite the complex character.
And yes! Miss Parker makes an appearance. So happy!Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 04:54 am
Great story so far! I like your additions of summary comments. It gives a nice reminder to the reader of what's in store for the reading. A unique story of another character with Angelo involved. Really intriguing storyline for Alicin and the pretenders. Please continue since this is one of the few that are worth reading many times.Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/06/10 11:42 pm
quite intriguing alot of characterisation and strong presence i am an avid reader great work well bye for nowReviewer: Jarodkyle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/09/09 11:44 pm
I really am enjoying your story. I like the way you write. When I have to stop I am very dissapointed and can't wait to read more... I am only on Part 4 but it has definetly cought my attention.
I look forward to reading more.Reviewer: Nathan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/02/08 11:27 pm