Reviews For End Of The Pursuit
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More updates on this! Too much possibilities on where to take this. Sorta like the series persona of leaving the reader hanging, but anticipating the next storyline.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I always liked this one, it was easy to write and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you for your review, it made my day!

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/10 01:21 am
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interesting twist

well written 



Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it!  I had fun with it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/01/08 06:19 am
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Oh brilliant. I was sad until I read the last few paragraphs. Great job on this one. Very typical what Jarod and Miss Parker might pull!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed the twisted ending.  It was so much fun to write.

Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/07 10:39 am
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I really like your style, the atmosphere you're creating. Must be hard for MP to accept the others’ blame for killing Jarod while knowing that he’s still alive. It says in your profile that the story’s not finished, but to quote MP „You look finished to me“. Though you could of course continue the story line, I think it’s much better to stop where you do.

Author's Response: Thanks Cathy!  You're right to continue the story would ruin it.  It needs to stop here.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/07 08:56 am
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