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Title: Through the Gates of Change (Version 1: Part 6)

That was very nicely done. I liked her fear of Lyle, Would be nice to see some of Madeline from his pov

Author's Response: Thank you again.  =)  Lyle definately senses Madeline's fear of men in general, and it definately goads him on!  He's giving me a little trouble at the moment, but I'll beat him into submission soon.  ;)

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/10 02:18 am
Title: Through the Gates of Change (Version 1: Part 6)

OH YES!!! Just read all three chapters and wow, I love that you incorporated Thomas into this fabulous story and YES, it meshes perfectly. "We came to an understanding.." Love that part! Wonderfully written fic here. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

Going back and rewatching the show again, I really really came to love Thomas and how happy he made Miss P... and I had to show Madeline's reaction to a strange man coming into the mix.  Unfortunately, it doesn't end well, which is what the next chapter will be about.  =(  But right now, I'm working on a part revolving around the season 2 ep where Brigitte tried to kill Mr. P... Madeline always seems to find herself in awkward situations!  ;)

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 06:21 am
Title: Through the Gates of Change (Version 1: Part 6)

Hmmm, let me think about this one .... does it mesh with the other parts?   Well it has my approval!  :) 

Author's Response: Well, I definately value your onion opinion (can you tell I've been working a bit too much lately?!  LOL), so that's good enough for me.  =)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/10 12:10 am
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