I can almost feel the tension between P/J, and it's so easy to imagine how Parker's inability to trust J and actually trust Mr. Parker would leave Jarod both perplexed and disgusted. But at the same time, it's easy to understand why Parker can not trust Jarod. You nailed all the characters. Fantastic read! You should have tons of reviews. :-)

Author's Response: You are my 'new' favorite person!  :)  Thanks for the compliment of "You nailed all the characters"  Coming from another writer, that means a lot!  Thank you!