MP was a shortsighted, abrassive mess of a person. I have no issue with her dieing.
Didn't really like the way you made Jarod out to be an immature wimp. MP was the immature one between them in the series.Reviewer: Nik Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/14 06:27 am
It's a good story even though there's major death. Believable for another possible outcome in the series. The beta reader did a good job on the diaglogue, but with minor wording mishaps here and there. This is another DVD addition to the actual series.Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/02/10 01:24 am
Without giving spoilers, all I can say is that I thought it was well written, though I would have preferred a different method for the felling the house of cards. : )Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/08/05 12:17 am