MP was a shortsighted, abrassive mess of a person. I have no issue with her dieing.
Didn't really like the way you made Jarod out to be an immature wimp. MP was the immature one between them in the series.
Reviewer: Nik Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/09/14 06:27 am
It's a good story even though there's major death. Believable for another possible outcome in the series. The beta reader did a good job on the diaglogue, but with minor wording mishaps here and there. This is another DVD addition to the actual series.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/02/10 01:24 am
Without giving spoilers, all I can say is that I thought it was well written, though I would have preferred a different method for the felling the house of cards. : )
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/08/05 12:17 am