An abrupt end but a happy end and I'm happy about that. Thank you for sharing these stories with us..
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 10:02 pm
Uh.... they got some explaining to do.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 10:00 pm
This takes me right back, this same old conundrum, their circumstances. I really enjoy this.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:59 pm
Aw so many shippery feels here. Melanie. Jarod Jarod Jarod.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:57 pm
Wow that took a turn with Jarod's arrival. ;)
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:56 pm
I like how it isn't awkward at all for them to all be together. It's really good.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:54 pm
Oh! I'm so glad there is another part to this. The suspence is so hard.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:52 pm
The quote sounded perfect to me. You got it right.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:50 pm
Such short amazing chapters. I do hope Jarod will be ok.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:49 pm
I think the second is the same as first? I love it. Jarod is so sweet to help her.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:48 pm
Oh I love it. I like how you have them doing normal things and ...being in love and togehter.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/20 09:47 pm
Does it end here? or is there another part?
Author's Response: Sorry about that. This was part of a Leaving Blue Cove Series. It does end with this one on chapter 6. It started with Happiness and ended with Meeting Place. I since added that it was part of a series and put the links in.
Date: 10/04/07 08:11 pm
I take it this is chapter 2 of Worst Nightmare? Nice touch.
Author's Response: This is part three of the series. Thank you for the review.
Date: 10/04/07 08:10 pm
Nice but choppy. It seems that your story is broken up. You need to put some notes on where this continues.
Author's Response: Thank you for telling this. I since added that this was part of a series and added the links to where the next part is.
Date: 10/04/07 08:09 pm
This is sweet even if I perfer Jarod and Miss Parker together. It was a delightful story and one you could imgaine happening if Thomas hadn't been killed. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review.
Date: 10/04/07 08:06 pm